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Revising Your Visuals

Final Presentation

When you are ready to integrate your graphs or other graphics into your lab report, you should go back and make a final check that your graphic will properly convey the necessary information to the reader. Assuming that you have chosen the proper graph type to display your data, most of these final adjustments concern the labeling and display of your variable axes and your title. Some things to consider:

Examples:

Histogram of glass rod strengths with well-balanced proportions and minimal clutter
Figure 1.

Figure 1 will be considered our optimal graph example. Notice the labeling of the variables and axes and the appropriate title. Also notice the comfortably spaced tick marks and the absence of grid lines (you don't need them in this graph to read the values of the bars).


Table 1. Histogram of Glass Rod Strengths (25 psi bins)
Stress (psi) No. of Occurrences (Annealed) No. of Occurrences (Tempered)
70 8 2
95 12 7
120 3 10
145 1 2
170 0 3
More 0 0

Histogram of glass rod strengths where the high label and grid line density makes reading the graph difficult
Figure 2.

The grid lines in Figure 2 are distracting, without adding anything to the interpretation of the graph. Also notice that scale labeling is too dense on the vertical axis, making it difficult to read.


Histogram of glass rod strengths where all labels are shortened and abbreviated
Figure 3.

In Figure 3, all of the labeling is too terse. The title indicates that the graph has something to do with glass rods, but we don't know what. The horizontal axis gives the units but not the variable name. The vertical axis does not clearly indicate that it is the number of occurrences. Notice the use of non-standard abbreviations in the legend. The 'temp' abbreviation could easily be mistaken for 'temperature' rather than 'tempered'.


Histogram of glass rod strengths where there is text duplication, typos, and lack of context in the title
Figure 4.

Figure 4 has an equally inappropriate title. The independent and dependent variables are duplicated in the title without giving us any background of what these variables are related to (i.e., glass rod strength). Also notice the misspelling in the title. Excel will not spell-check your titles and labeling, so double-check!


Histogram of glass rod strengths where the title is very large and the graph is shrunken to compensate
Figure 5a.
Histogram of glass rod strengths where the overall chart is too small and difficult to make out information
Figure 5b.

Figures 5 shows examples of too large and too small text. The too large text in Figure 5a ends up crowding out the most important part of the graphic, the graph, without adding anything to the readability of the graphic. Also notice that too large text begins to create problems with words breaking across lines. The smaller text in Figure 5b provides more room for the graph and nice spacing for the scale labels, but it will be difficult to read. Though the small text may be marginally acceptable on a high resolution laser printer, it will be hard to read off ink-jet printers and on the screen. Try to keep all text at least 9-10 points in size.